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新gre写作题库2012:历年GRE考试Issue主题范文及评析05

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GRE考试形式:中国大陆地区、香港、澳门、韩国目前执行分开考试的形式。由机考(分析性写作)和笔试(语文、数学)组成。
Computersofallshapesandsizes,p.c.’s,laptops,faxes,phones,thelistneverends.Allconsideredbyoursocietyasgreattechnologicaladvances.Notmanywouldarguethatthedevelopmentofthesetoolshasnotadvancedourworldinsomeways.Howevertheycertainlyseemtobemakingourworldoneinwhichcontactwithourfellowmanislessandlessnecessary.Thoughsomemaybemorecomfortablenothavingtoengageindirectcontact,itisquestionablewhetherthisisbeneficialtosocietyasawhole.Theveryleastresultcouldinfactbeaverylonelyworld,butitmayresultinmoresignificantproblems.
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Thisresponseisseriouslyflawed.Theanalysisoftheissueisextremelylimited,andthereareseriousproblemsinsentencestructure.Thewriter’sposition,neverclearlystated,seemstobethatasaresultoftechnologicaldevelopments,"contactwithourfellowmanislessandlessnecessary."However,theimplicationsofthisstatement(andothers)areneverexploredordeveloped.Furthermore,thelistoftechnologicaladvancementsdoesnotsupportorclarifythewriter’salreadytenuouslyheldposition.Eachnewsentencecouldserveasaspringboardtoathoughtfulanalysisbutinsteadtakestheresponsefurtherfromtheapparentpremise.
Whiletheessayexhibitsalackofsentencevarietyandcontainssomegrammaticalerrors,thelanguageisforthemostpartcontrolled.Thisresponsedidnotreceiveascoreof2becauseofalanguageproblem,butbecausereasoning,analysis,anddevelopmentareextremelythinandinsubstantial. 感谢您阅读《历年GRE考试Issue主题范文及评析05 》一文,出国留学网(liuxue86.com)编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。

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