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GRE考试形式:中国大陆地区、香港、澳门、韩国目前执行分开考试的形式。由机考(分析性写作)和笔试(语文、数学)组成。
Forourgrandparentsitoccurredthroughfilmsandbooks.Forthebabyboomersitwasaresultoftelevisionandrevolutionarymusic.Nomatterhowtheimpacttookplace,itisclearthatsinceitsveryadvent,themediahaveplayedacrucialroleinnotsimplybeingrepresentativeofthevaluesofoursocietybutcreatingthemaswell.
DuringtheroaringtwentiesAmericansfoundthemselvesinastrugglebetweentheoldwaysoftheirancestorsandthenewwaysofthefuture.Theoncesteadfastbeliefsthatmenandwomenshouldnottouchwhiledancing,andthatladiesshouldnotdrinkorsmokeweresuddenlybeingchallenged.Fromwherewasallthisrebellionstemming?PartlyitwasduetothereturningdoughboysfromtheshoresofEuropebringinghomerevolutionaryideastheyhadencounteredwhileatwar.Nonetheless,returningsoldierscouldnotbeheldresponsibleforthesocialupheavalthatAmericaexperienced.Therehadtobeanothercause,andtherewas,themedia.Althoughthefilmsoftheeraweresilenttheyspokevolumestothesocietyforwhichtheywerecreated.Womeninthesemoviesworetheirhemlinesafewinchesshorterthanthedecadebeforethemandtheyworecosmeticstoaccentuatetheirnewbobbedhaircuts.Themovies,aswellasthebooksofthatera,demonstratedanewmaterialisticattitudethatAmericahadneverbeforeexperienced.Filmsportrayedeverycharacterashavingthemoneytobuyanewcar,drink,smokeandpartakeintheleisuresoflife,aphilosophythatwassoonadoptedbytheyouthofthedecade.Theuseofthemediainthetwentieswastoserveasacatalystfortherevolutionaryideasthatwerecirculating.ThefilmsandbooksofthateraspedAmericaalongitspathofchangethateventuallyledtothegreatestsocialunrestthattheUnitedStateshadeverknown.
Unlikethetwenties,thesixtiesandseventiesutalizedthemediainawaythatappealedtothosesearchingfortruthinalostandconfusedworld.MartinLutherKingJr.realizedtheimpactofthemediaonsocietyduringhiscampaignforcivilrights.Kingurgedhisfollowerstowithstandanyabusethattheymightencounterbecausethemediawilltaketheirpeacefulnessintothehomesoftheirsociety.Bydoingso,Kingsucessfullybegantochangethetraditionalviewofrace.Americansbegantosympathizewiththeprotestersbecauseoftheundeservedturmoiltheyfacedatthehandsofthegovernment.Asaresult,AmericarelinquishedtheJimCrowlawsandsawmanyothergroupspressfortheirindividualrightsaswell.TelevisioncamerasrolledasCesarChavezorganizedthemigrantworkersinCaliforniaandasBellaAbzugandGloriaSteinhamlinkedarmstoprotestthelackofwomen’srights.
Whilethemediahelpedtoshapesomeattitudesaboutracismandgenderitalsohelpedtouncoverthetruthbehindgovernmentlies.DuringtheNixon
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Thisisanoutstandingresponse,eventhoughitisnotquitefinished.Thewriter’sviewsontheissuearesocogent,wellarticulated,andwelldevelopedthatthewriterwasnotpenalizedforfailingtoprovideaconclusion.Whatmattersisthequalityofthinkingandwritingdisplayed,notwhetheranessayistotallyfinishedorhasacertainnumberofwords.
Thewriter’sskillisapparentintheopeninglines.Thefirstwords,"Forourgrandparentsitoccurred,"immediatelysparkthereader’sinterest.Thequickrepetitionofsentencestructureand,onceagain,theintentionallyvagueuseof"it"("Forthebabyboomersitwas")effectivelydrawthereaderin.Bythethirdsentence,weknowthatthisessaywilladdressthecomplexityoftheissue("notsimplybeingrepresentative???butcreatingthemaswell")andthatthewriterisfullyincommandofthisdiscussion.
Therestoftheessayaddressestheinfluenceofhistoricaleventsandmediaonthevaluesofmodernsociety,fromthe"roaringtwenties"tothe"sixtiesandseventies."Insightfulanalysisaccompaniesthehistoricalreferences.Forexample,thewriterpersuasivelyarguesthatprominentfigures(King,butalsoChavez,Abzug,andSteinham)advancedtheirsocialagendasbycapitalizingonthepowerofthemediatochangepublicopinion.
Throughouttheessay,thewriteruseslanguageandsyntaxeffectively.Wordchoiceisprecise("cosmeticstoaccentuatetheirnewbobbedhaircuts"),sentencesarestructuredtocommunicateideasclearly("Therehadtobeanothercause,andtherewas,themedia"),andtransitionalphraseshelpmovetheargumentforward("Unlikethetwenties,thesixties????"and"Bydoingso,Kingsuccessfullybegantochangethetraditionalviewofrace.")
Occasionalerrorsdoappear(e.g.,notethelackoflogicalcomparisonin"women???woretheirhemlines???shorterthanthedecadebeforethem"),buttheyarenotintrusive.
Other6essaysmightbemorefullydeveloped;indeed,thisessaywouldbestrongerifthewriterhadgoneontodiscussthemedia’sroleinNixon’sWatergatescandalandtobringtheargumenttoitsconclusion.However,eveninitsunfinishedstate,theessaydoespresentaninsightful,well-articulateddiscussionoftheissue. 感谢您阅读《历年GRE考试Issue主题范文及评析07 》一文,出国留学网(liuxue86.com)编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。

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