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GRE考试形式:中国大陆地区、香港、澳门、韩国目前执行分开考试的形式。由机考(分析性写作)和笔试(语文、数学)组成。
Thethoughtofapassion
InreadingsuchapassageastheonegiventomeasanassignmentIcan’thelpbutthinkofananalogythatenteredmymind.Itismyenduringinterestinthefieldofmultimedia.IsaythisbecauseoftheideasinwhichIcultivateasanartistofmanymediamaterialssuchaspaints,film,computeranimatedsoftware,etc.BeinganexpressionistItakeinmysurroundingsandpersonalexperiencesfromcommonplacesandthingsandtellastoryfrommyperspectiveusingthevarioustoolswhetheritbecomputeraidedorhanddrawn.Myideascomefrompeopleorthingsbecauseittellsastory.Thestorycanbeabstract,little,big,orevenstrange.Torecordstorieslikethesemaysparkideasthatmaycometomeinadominoeffect.It’sbeautiful]Isharedthiswithyoutoconcludethatsometimesevencommonthingssuchasapencilandanemptypagecanspellloutyourfateandunlimitedpossibilitieswhenyouhaveapassionoraninterestthatdrivesyourhungerforinnovation. 中华考试网
COMMENTARY
Thisessayisseriouslyflawedinitsanalysisoftheissue.Thewriterattemptstoaddressthetopicbyfocusingonhisorherinterestin"multimedia"art.Yet,whileisolatedwordsandphrasesfromthetopicappearthroughouttheessay,theessayneverclearlystatesapositionontheissue.Forexample,inadiscussionofmultimediaart,thewritermakesthefollowingobservation:"BeinganexpressionistItakeinmysurroundingsandpersonalexperiencesfromcommonplacesandthingsandtellastoryfrommyperspectiveusingthevarioustoolswhetheritbecomputeraidedorhanddrawn."Theessaycirclesaroundtheissue,withouteverreallyengagingit.
Theessayisalsomarkedbyseriousflawsinlanguageuse:inaccuratewordchoice("andtellastoryfrommyperspectiveusingthevarioustoolswhetheritbecomputeraidedorhanddrawn."),unclearpronounreference("Myideascomefrompeopleorthingsbecauseittellsastory"),and,ingeneral,adebilitatinglackofclarityandprecision.Theseerrorsfrequentlyinterferewithmeaning,acharacteristicofmanyessaysscored2. 感谢您阅读《历年GRE考试Issue主题范文及评析35 》一文,出国留学网(liuxue86.com)编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。

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