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30"The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time."
30 尽管科技为生活带来很多便利，但目的不仅仅是提高效率和有更多娱乐时间
1、承认科技发展带来的便利和高效
telephone, Internet, improve th e efficiency in communication
automobile, train, plane fast transportation
household electronics microwave oven; electronic cooker; washing machine
2、科技发展提高效率的同时娱乐时间并没有增加
be expected to have high er production; increased workload; employee complain
3、科技发展有许多目的，不仅限于提高效率和带来娱乐时间
medical technology earlier detect of disease; the once fatal diseas e curable; reduce suffering for patiens; information technology facilitate global communication, info rmation sharing; civil engineering construction of building, bridge, road higher quality
30.技术进步和闲暇
一、技术应该带来效率，但确实越来越忙，不过技术进步的 purpose is far more than leisure
二、技术应该带来效率 It is true that technological advancement have made life faster and easier--that is, more efficient.