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In sum, the argument is logically unsound. To strengthen it the speaker must show that the
1,000 executives in the photos were in fact using their dominant hand, that they are
representative of all prominent executives, and that prominence in business is generally the
result of an executive's business practices. To better assess the argument I would need to
compare the percentage of left-handed people who succeed in business with those who
succeed in other vocations. I would also need more information about the business practices
of left-handed people to determine whether they employ similar practices, and whether
right-handed people who have succeeded in business employ different practices.
Argument 83
The following is a letter from an editor at Liber Publishing Company to the company's
president.
"In recent years, Liber has unfortunately moved away from its original mission: to publish the
works of regional small-town authors instead of those of big-city authors. Just last year, 90
percent of the novels we published were written by authors who maintain a residence in a big
city. Although this change must have been intended to increase profits, it has obviously
backfired, because Liber is now in serious financial trouble. The only way to address this
problem is to return to our original mission. If we return to publishing only the works of regional
small-town authors, our financial troubles will soon be resolved."
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An editor at Liber Publishing contends here that Liber will become profitable again if and
only it returns to its original mission of publishing works primarily by small-town authors. To
support this contention the editor cites the fact that since moving away from that mission Liber
has become unprofitable. The editor's argument suffers from a series of logical problems, and
is therefore wholly unpersuasive.
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