GRE写作部分将重点考察考生有针对性地对具体考题做出反应的能力，而非要求考生堆砌泛泛的文字。具体说来，这些重点关注的能力包括：1、 清楚有效地阐明复杂观点；2、 用贴切的事理和事例支撑观点；3、考察/验证他人论点及其相关论证；4、支撑一个有针对性的连贯的讨论；5、控制标准书面英语的各个要素。写作部分将联合考察逻辑推理和分析写作两种技能，并且将加大力度引进那些需要考生做出有针对性的回应的考题，降低考生依赖事前准备（如背诵）的材料的可能性。
Finally, the mayor provides no evidence that the survey's respondents are representative of
the overall group of people whose trash goes to the city's landfill. Lacking such evidence, it is
entirely possible that people inclined to recycle were more willing to respond to the survey than
other people were. In short, without better evidence that the survey is statistically reliable the
mayor cannot rely on it to draw any firm conclusions about the overall recycling commitment of
West Egg residents--let alone about how quickly the landfill will reach capacity.
In sum, the mayor's projection is simply not credible, at least based on the memo. Rather
than relying solely on questionable recycling statistics, the mayor should provide direct
evidence that the amount of trash going to the landfill is declining and that this trend will not
reverse itself anytime soon. To better assess the accuracy of the mayor's projection it would be
useful to know who besides West Egg residents contributes trash to the land fLU, and whether
the amount of trash those people contribute is declining or is likely to decline in the near future.
Argument 11
The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of Alta Manufacturing.
"During the past year, Alta Manufacturing had thirty percent more on-the-job accidents than
nearby Panoply Industries, where the work shifts are one hour shorter than ours. Experts
believe that a significant contributing factor in many on-the-job accidents is fatigue and sleep
deprivation among workers. Therefore, to reduce the number of on-the-job accidents at Alta
and thereby increase productivity, we should shorten each of our three work shifts by one hour
so that our employees will get adequate amounts of sleep."
This editorial recommends that Alta Manufacturing reduce its work shifts by one hour each in
order to reduce its on-the-job accident rate and thereby increase Alta's productivity. To support
this recommendation the author points out that last year the number of accidents at Alta was
30% greater than at Panoply Industries, where work shifts were one hour shorter. The author
also cites certain experts who believe that many on-the-job accidents are caused by fatigue
and sleep deprivation. I find this the argument unconvincing for several reasons.
First and foremost, the author provides absolutely no evidence that overall worker
productivity is attributable in part to the number of on-the-job accidents. Although common
sense informs me that such a relationship exists, the author must provide some evidence of
this cause-and-effect relationship before I can accept the author's final conclusion that the
proposed course of action would in fact increase Alta's productivity.
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