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  第二篇文章:

  The University of Claria is generally considered one of the best universities in the world because of its instructors' reputation, which is based primarily on the extensive research and publishing record of certain faculty members.
  In addition, several faculty members are internationally renowned as leaders in their fields.
  For example, many of the faculty from the English department are regularly invited to teach at universities in other countries.
  Furthermore, two recent graduates of the physics department have gone on to become candidates for the Nobel Prize in Physics.
  And 75 percent of the students are able to find employment after graduating.
  Therefore, because of the reputation of its faculty, the University of Claria should be the obvious choice for anyone seeking a quality education.

  原题逻辑顺序:UC老师牛==〉UC学生牛==〉想牛就选择UC

  While the University of Claria appears to have an excellent reputation based on the accomplishments and reputations of its faculty, one would also wish to consider other issues before deciding upon this particular institution for undergraduate or graduate training. 首先承认UC的声望看起来确实不错,算是部分的同意了原文的观点,并简短的展开论证说事因为老师牛。随后便指出还有他因,但是并没有展开它因。(留到正文第一段来展开) The Physics and English departments are internationally known, but these are only two of the areas in which one might study. 这里指出论据的不充足。实际上是在攻击原文的论据逻辑链。Other departments are not listed; is this because no others are worth mentioning, or because no other departments bothered to turn in their accomplishments and kudos to the publicity office? 给出了论证:提出两个问题进行质疑。

  The assumption is that because English and Physics have excellent brains in the faculty offices, their teaching skills and their abilities to pass on knowledge and the love of learning to their students are equally laudable. BODY打头第一段与开头段第一句话对应,具体提出了他因。同时,还注意到所让步的内容(老师牛学校就牛)仍然是一致的。质疑:老师牛,就能提供牛的教育吗? Unfortunately, this is often not the case. 一针见血的指出不是这么回事。 A prospective student would certainly be advised to investigate thoroughly the teaching talents and attitudes of the professors, the library and research facilities, the physical plant of the departments in which he or she was planning to study, as well as the living arrangements on or off campus, and the facilities available for leisure activities and entertainment.具体论证:还有其他的因素决定教育的水平的。论证方法为列举他因。这里的论证给人的感觉就是列的东西多,而且细。

  This evaluation of the University of Claria is too brief, and too general. 这里对于原文中逻辑链中的论据不足进行证明。实际上就是和开头段后两句话(只有两个系不够)相对应,进一步展开进行证明原文的论据怎么不充分,我们要全面评估UC除了只知道提供的两个系的信息外还要知道哪些。Nothing is mentioned about the quality of overall education; it only praises the accomplishments of a few recent graduates and professors.

  这里属于复述原文,立好靶子做好准备开始攻击。More important than invitations to teach elsewhere, which might have been engineered by their own departmental heads in an attempt to remove them from the campus for a semester or two, is the relationship between teacher and student.

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